This is a good choice of words to describe your magazine! Keep up the good work! ;)
I felt that this pitch had a lot of good information and the music in the background fitted in with the style of magazine it was going to be.
The music was well placed in this video and gave an extra dimension to add tot he emphasis of the magazines genre.
I thought the pitch mainly focused on bands and artists, could of added more information about the audience.
The music suited the pitch and magazine idea well. Colours work well together and would work well as the initial palette. Would definitely buy this magazine despite the estimated price as it fits my preferred genre.
The music used suited the pitch well, however it was mainly focused on the music and the artists involved in your genre and not on your audience. More information needs to be added in so we have a clear view on what your magazine will look like and who it will be aimed at.
The music complemented the pitch well as it fit in with the genre of the magazine, being alternative/ indie. However, the pitch focused mainly on artists and bands and could have done with including more information.
I agree with the previous comments that the music fitted well with your pitch; emphasising your genre. The pitch itself could have included more detail about audiences and your thoughts on what your magazine would be like i.e. colours etc. Keep up the good work!
I like the idea behind this pitch, it has good potential! Maybe try to target what your audience want to see, so far you have a good image of what genre you're going for. Try to now link what you have to your audience in relevance to what they want to see within the genre.
The pitch overall was good, giving the audience a clear idea of what music genre you are aiming your magazine at, as the choice of music combined with the images you displayed on screen shown this clearly. However, I was unsure on what current magazines will influence your own design. As well as being unsure on the specific age range you are aiming your magazine at. Therefore, I feel you could of added more detail in this area of your pitch.
I liked this pitch! More information and less photos of bands? Then we would achieve more of an idea.
You have a clear idea on what your magazine is going to include, very informative pitch with well chosen images to match your chosen words, well done
Your genre is very clear. I have an idea of what types of artists you would include in your magazine. However your pitch wasn't very informative and would like to know about price and audience that you plan on targeting your product on. I also could not visualize your magazine very clear. You need to think about what your magazine could potentially look like and your inspirations and your target auidence very clearly and careful in order to achieve more with your mag.
This magazine has great potential if you can get the style right. Overall, a great pitch with a clear idea of what want to create.
Good pitch overall, you need to include more words to describe your magazine to give a better idea. But the audience and genre is very clear.
The music choice and photos showed what genre of magazine you will create. However it was missing a few details about your magazine so it was difficult to imagine what you will aspire to make. Also needed to include more detail on your intended audience. besides from that good pitch and good luck :)